Fic: Obsession, F/K, NC17

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Title: Obsession
Pairing: Fraser/Ray K
Rating: NC17
Notes: After I read Rings of Silver, Rings of Gold by nicci_mac, I was left with a totally hot image engraved on my brain. Then this happened: my first Due South smut. 940 words of pure PWP with no redeeming features whatsoever.

Super speedy beta by the incomparable elfscribe5

Obsession

Fraser seems to have developed an obsession with Ray's nipples recently, and that's a pretty good thing as far as Ray's concerned. He read in a magazine once (probably Cosmo - Stella used to bring it home regularly, though never without a dismissive remark) that having their nipples played with is a real turn on for something like sixty-five percent of men. He can't help wondering what the other thirty-five percent feel. Is it just like an itch or an irritation for them, instead of those shooting streaks of pleasure that have Ray arching up, gasping, desperate for more? Maybe they've just never had it done right.

Stella used to like to lick them, or suck at them gently, playfully, and yeah, that was good, but with Fraser it's something else entirely. There are always teeth in with the tongue and it's intense, rough almost to the point of pain, and it drives Ray out of his mind. He's pretty sure he could come that way without anyone getting anywhere near his dick, and sooner or later he's going to want to find out if he's right. As it is, Fraser's never quite let him get that far.

There was that one time when Fraser got him in front of the mirror and pulled him up close, Ray's naked back against Fraser's fully dressed front, and just attacked him, hands on both his nipples and teeth in his neck. Ray was shouting out within seconds, clutching at Fraser's hips just to stay upright and grinding against him, hard, watching the whole unbelievable show in the glass. He'd been almost there, but when Fraser growled, "Touch yourself," he hadn't stopped to think, had just grabbed hold and gone for it. Three strokes and he was out, out for a good ten minutes of groaning and trying to breathe and wondering where the fuck his brain went, before he got it together enough to drag Fraser over to the bed and tear his jeans down and give him the blowjob he deserved for getting Ray off like that.

Sometime after that, Ray started thinking about piercing. He had his ear done back in the '80s, still has the hole there and could probably open it up if he tried. He remembers sliding the ring through, over and over, the faint catch and pull of the hinge, and tries to imagine the feeling translated to his nipples. Just the thought makes him shiver. Fraser would probably disapprove to begin with, but he'd be fascinated too, and no way would he be able to keep his fingers or his mouth off for long.

Whenever Ray thinks about it, he's hard right away, and if he jerks himself off it's over in less than a minute.


This time it's Ray who's flat on his back and yeah, naked, and Fraser's lying at his side. Fraser's got a leg draped across Ray's, just above the knees, holding him down and pushing a rock-hard erection up against him. Fraser's mouth's clamped around Ray's right nipple, and one hand's holding Ray's wrists above his head while the other alternates like he can't make up his mind, stroking up and down Ray's dick far too lightly, then sliding up to pinch his other nipple, far too hard. It's fucking torture, and Fraser knows damn well how much Ray's loving it.

He knows, too, when Ray's close enough that he hasn't a chance of holding it back, and that's when he finally grips Ray's dick properly, squeezing firmly with his thumb just flicking over the tip. And that's it for Ray, great hot pulses of excruciating pleasure, and shit, his nipples are going to be sore for days.

He waits till Fraser's finished using his fingers, till he's lubed himself up and he's pushed inside and he's fucking Ray steadily, eyes on his face the whole time. Ray's just come hard enough to damage something, but this, being spread open and forced apart and pinned down like this, with Fraser strong and demanding and taking what he wants, is almost enough to get him there again.

All he needs is to see Fraser losing it.

"'S good," Ray says, pushing down with his elbows as he tries to lift his hips higher. With his ankles hooked over Fraser's shoulders, it's not easy.

Fraser's pausing for a moment, getting his breath. He grunts, and stares down at Ray, like he's starving.

Ray brings both hands up to his own chest, slowly. Just the fingers circling lightly at first, then adding in the thumbs and squeezing gently, rhythmically. It's painful, but definitely in the good way.

Fraser’s eyes are huge. He starts moving again, and he's thrusting hard this time. Ray waits until he starts to pick up speed.

"So, Frase, I've been wondering about getting my nipples pierced," he says. "What do you think?"

Got to give Fraser his due, he does try to answer. But he doesn't get any further than "Dear God, Ray! You..." and then he's hitching Ray's legs up further, slamming into him, and it's all over bar the shouting, and there's plenty of that.

Afterwards they're lying tangled up together, half asleep and sticky with sweat and spunk and too blissed out to care. Ray drags his head across the pillow to kiss Fraser softly, and murmurs, "Hey."

"Nguh," Fraser says, and that's the end of that conversation.

So it looks like they'll have to discuss the nipple piercing thing another time. Ray's just about made the decision, anyway. It's going to hurt like hell, but he's got a feeling it's going to be worth it.

Comments

[chuckjd.livejournal.com]

*falls apart*

Nguh is right.

[eledhwenlin]

That was very hot. :)

[akite.livejournal.com]

:fans self: OMG! Yeah, hot.

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

god, this is scorchingly hot. Ray and his nipples - just, wow. this:

There was that one time when Fraser got him in front of the mirror and pulled him up close, Ray's naked back against Fraser's fully dressed front, and just attacked him, hands on both his nipples and teeth in his neck. Ray was shouting out within seconds, clutching at Fraser's hips just to stay upright and grinding against him, hard, watching the whole unbelievable show in the glass. He'd been almost there, but when Fraser growled, "Touch yourself," he hadn't stopped to think, had just grabbed hold and gone for it.

is a particularly fantastic mental image. This whole THING is incredibly hot. Wonderful way to introduce yourself to the fandom. Welcome!

[ladyivy.livejournal.com]

Okay, I could use a shower now. That was really hot.

So, are you going to write the sequel where Ray gets the piercing? Inquiring minds want to know. And even if the muse does not lead to a sequel to this fic, you should definitely write more in this fandom.

[isiscolo.livejournal.com]

Hot like WHOA.

[justbreathe80.livejournal.com]

This is very, very hot. I love your naughty Fraser. And, just, WOW. And this:

He waits till Fraser's finished using his fingers, till he's lubed himself up and he's pushed inside and he's fucking Ray steadily, eyes on his face the whole time. Ray's just come hard enough to damage something, but this, being spread open and forced apart and pinned down like this, with Fraser strong and demanding and taking what he wants, is almost enough to get him there again.

SO FUCKING HOT. Fantastic job, lady. Welcome to DS porn! *g*

[ruthless1.livejournal.com]

Your icon is CRACKING me up. I hadn't seen it before. And I'll just add a second nguh....

[ruthless1.livejournal.com]

In your intro you said this has no redeeming features. I beg to differ. It was very well written and very very hot. I am going to bed in a few minutes and hopefully Ray and Fraser will walk through my dreams all night long.

[missapocalyptic.livejournal.com]

I don't have a piercing kink - but that so doesn't matter! This is what smut should be: Hot, scorchingly hot. Phew. Thanks.

[melpemone.livejournal.com]

I do have a piercing kink, and damn, that was brilliant. Thanks! :D

[spikedluv]

Wow, yeah, nipples. Guh.

[bibliokat.livejournal.com]

Nrghhhh.

Well my day just got a little bit better. Thanks for sharing and I certainly hope you write more!

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

I'm glad I managed to entertain you. If that's the word.

Your icon is absolutely brilliant. I might be the only woman in the whole of slash fandom who hadn't spotted that anagram, and now I'm just entranced by it. Yay!

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Glad you thought so. I'm all in favour of proper stories, but sometimes it's just got to be smut.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Like your icon (love it!) Glad you enjoyed the fic. :-)

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I've no idea where it came from - I'd intended to spend yesterday writing something whimsical and harmless for ds_flashfiction, but smut just happened instead. I guess that's OK as long as it works!

Thanks for the kind words. And can I just say, the DS fandom is a very good place to be.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Well, there's a sequel of sorts that I might get round to posting later tonight. The actual piercing, though? Hate to say it, but it actually makes me a bit squeamish. I could see my way to revisiting the scenario a bit later on, though, once things are a bit less sensitive!

Glad you enjoyed this one, anyway.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Glad you thought so. Thanks!

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Thanks! DS porn is a wonderful place to be, although I am a bit worried about the contents of my brain right now, since I don't seem to be able to think about anything else. I'm just so obsessed with toppy but clueless Fraser and totally knowing Ray that I don't know what to do with myself. I'm not even sure it would be my take on things in a proper story, but hell, who cares.

Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks again for your kind words.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I hope you managed a night of not-so-sweet smutty F/K dreams. (Personally I never get those. It's always the steep slippery slope or naked in front of an audience type option for me, and belive me, neither of those are at all sexy.)

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

I don't have a piercing kink Actually, nor do I. Or not usually, at least. (Though I might be kidding myself there - I hwrite an OC in another universe who gets a lot of mileage out of his nipple rings...) It's more Fraser's obsessive interest in bits of Ray's anatomy that does me in. I'm glad it didn't only work for me!

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad this worked for you.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Wow, yeah, nipples Quite. I can't believe there are some people who still wonder why men have them at all. Sadly lacking in imagination, if you ask me. ;-)

[ruthless1.livejournal.com]

As a matter of fact I didn't have those nice dreams I was hoping for. I think I've been reading too much Fraser/RayK so there was a morgue in my dream and in the dream - my friend was in an accident and his astral body came to get me and take me to the hospital to see him. It was so spooky that when I woke up - I said out loud "Okay - I never ever have premonitions right?" veeeeeeeeeeeery creepy - especially when I ran into that friend at the coffeeshop. I told him to drive carefully today.
I chalk it up to WAY too much due south reading in the last week.
*puts away the boys for a little while*

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

I'm glad it was a good nrghhhh. And yes, there is more, probably at some stage this evening.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

God, tell me about it. I'm so obsessed with DS at the moment that I fall asleep thinking about a story and wake up still thinking about it, and don't seem to have had anything you could call real rest in between. At least you're able to put the boys away. I think I might have passed that point.

I'm sorry to hear you ended up with a spooky dream! Hope your friend's OK.

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

Oh, my lord! Wow--is that hot!

This, especially:
He waits till Fraser's finished using his fingers, till he's lubed himself up and he's pushed inside and he's fucking Ray steadily, eyes on his face the whole time. Ray's just come hard enough to damage something, but this, being spread open and forced apart and pinned down like this, with Fraser strong and demanding and taking what he wants, is almost enough to get him there again.

All he needs is to see Fraser losing it.

Yeah, Ray that'd do it. The description alone almost does it for me. :)

But the BEST thing? Is Ray's waiting until THAT moment to spring his question on Fraser! ROFL! What a manipulator! I love him!

Can't believe this is your first dS "smut." I hope you write lots more! But if they get any hotter, we're going to have to install fire extinguishers in this fandom. Whew! I post my Grand Slam icon in your honor, because you hit one here.

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

They don't only have nipples. They have the whole structure for producing milk; it just doesn't mature without the proper hormones.

And amen to what you said.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Yay! I'm really glad this worked for you. I'm always a bit nervous when posting out-and-out porn, just in case I've got it wrong and I'm the only freak in the world who finds it hot. It's a big relief when other people confess to liking it too. So thanks for the enthusiastic feedback.

What a manipulator! Yes, indeed. I don't usually write very top/bottom type pairings, but it really works for me here. But only with Ray being much more in the know and Fraser (for once) just going with his urges. It's a scenario I could explore in some detail, if I wasn't determined to write some proper plot at some stage!

I post my Grand Slam icon in your honor, because you hit one here.
*GLOWS* That's so lovely. Thank you!

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

They don't only have nipples. They have the whole structure for producing milk... Quite. What kind of intelligent design is that? Heh.

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

What kind of intelligent design is that? Heh.

Well, actually, what explains it is what I call "Eve's Rib." See, although men have been claiming for millennia that the male is the standard human being and the female is a variant? It's exactly the other way around.

All fetuses begin life in female form. Those who have the XY chromosome pair have an event begin (the Nova program I saw on the subject called it an "accident"!) at, I think, 5 weeks gestation (but don't quote me), that begins changing them into males. Scientists discovered this when they found out that some people who appear completely female externally are in fact genetic males (XY).

I understand that lots of times this fact isn't picked up until the person is having tests done for infertility. They can't reproduce, and internally, they may be lacking some of the female structures, such as a womb. In those people, the change wasn't completed. Most of these people aren't transsexuals, either; they totally identify as females. I read recently that Jamie Lee Curtis is one of these genetically male "females."

I've also heard it suggested (elsewhere) that ancient human males may have been able to lactate and nurse children. Not sure what the evidence is.

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

I'm always a bit nervous when posting out-and-out porn, just in case I've got it wrong and I'm the only freak in the world who finds it hot. It's a big relief when other people confess to liking it too.

*nods* Yup, we all feel that way. I was very nervous when I posted Dominoes (http://community.livejournal.com/stop_drop_porn/8723.html#cutid1) because of the imaginary women in the story. I was afraid it would be too weird for other people. It's a very personal thing, revealing to others what you find hot.

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

although men have been claiming for millennia that the male is the standard human being and the female is a variant? It's exactly the other way around.

This always amuses the hell out of me. And when you think about it, it should be obvious that the basic model is the one which actually has the capacity to reproduce.

...ancient human males may have been able to lactate and nurse children.

I'd love to know where that comes from! Perhaps I'll have to tear myself away from fandom for ten minutes to try and find out.

[j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com]

And when you think about it, it should be obvious that the basic model is the one which actually has the capacity to reproduce.

Exactly. Big "duh." Men were just so SURE they were better that this obvious fact never occurred to them. They also thought they were smarter. Hee!

I'd love to know where that comes from!

I don't remember. It has to have been something I read when I was nursing my kids. Maybe Tine Thevenin's The Family Bed. Not sure. But the Internet will have the answer somewhere, I should think.

[pixiesmith.livejournal.com]

Lol. We know what Fraser thinks of it. Utterly brilliant!

[capella-fic.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

[debris_k.livejournal.com]

I have to agree; your icon? Brilliant. Me? Apparently blind as that one flew right by me till just now.

[qbeater.livejournal.com]

wow umm ya dead!