SLASHFIC Fraser/RayK

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Title - Dare
Author - Berty
Rating - NC-17
Season - post Mounty on the Bounty - that's the only spolier too.
Brilliant Buggers - Nicci for the alpha, Pepe for the kick in the head, Missappocalyptic for the beta and falling off her perch and Cimmie for the beta and helping me despite her taste running to that other Ray guy....

This little story came from a single line in another fic I'm working on. Of course it then consumed me and the first fic is STILL not done cos all my time has been spent playing with this one.

This is where I need to say mondo thanks to Nicci, who sent me the most beautiful manip just at the point when I was running out of steam and who made me *bounce* to the finishing line. And to Pepe who read it when the boys were stuck and I couldn't seem to figure out why. She pointed to the exact point in the narrative and said " Your muse didn't want you to go that way, you just did it so you could finish it quicker". *sigh* I want to be as clever as those two when I grow up.

And also I have to *GRIN* at Missappocalyptic for being a fab beta and for falling off her perch whenever a certain dark haired Canadian mutters a profanity. Hehehehehehe! Wanna see how many I can fit in? *beams*

SO - here's the fic -

Dare


And this is the image that wrote the sex scene - thanks to Nicci for being so talented and for letting me post this link - it's very pretty and NC17 - so don't go there if you don't like that!

Come for Me

Comments

[sara-merry99.livejournal.com]

*gurgle* That was *marvellous*!!

So nice to see a story by you on a rather dull morning anyway, and then to have it be so *incredibly* hot and sweet--and I love Ray's freakout in the kitchen and how calm and certain Fraser is.

And, OMG is it HOT.

Thank YOU!

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Glad to have brightened your morning! :-) Thanks for letting me know.

*hug*

[spikedluv]

That was so very good! And that picture...guh!

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :-) You can see how the picture would have helped...guh, indeed!

[grey853.livejournal.com]

I loved both the story and the picture. I love the whole idea of the big words/dare and that Fraser took him up on it. Lovely idea well excecuted.

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Cheers! *beams* Glad you liked it.

[sam80853.livejournal.com]

Wow! That was hot and the picture that goes with the story ... guh ... hot!

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Yeah, the picture did kinda help. LOL! In fact, couldn't really fail to be inspired.

[isiscolo.livejournal.com]

Mmm! I liked this a lot, hot and sexy, and I love the big words.

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Thanks very much! Glad you liked it. I like the odd long word myself! :-)

[purpig21.livejournal.com]

Wow! That was HOT! and funny and sweet...damn..so many factors that all came together perfectly.

And yep, for someone (me) that normally can't stand manips..I can definitely see how you were motivated by it. That is probably the best manip I have ever seen.

Thank you both for this.

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Yeah? Cool! *BEAMS* I'm glad you liked. Thanks very much for letting me know. And I'll pass your comment about the manip on to Nicci - I'm sure she'll be thrilled.

[chuckjd.livejournal.com]

I commented on the fic itself. But.... GUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

As I said on my comment, this is the first Due South fic ever.

You win.

You just... win. I can't... no words.

Blood! Come back to the brain so you can help me here!

Excuse me... I'll be in my bunk.

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

Heh! Hello again! Like I said - jumping in with a slash NC-17 was very...um...brave of you! I'm really glad you liked it. Off you pop to sleep it off now. *beams*

[chuckjd.livejournal.com]

Yeah... sleep.

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[http://users.livejournal.com/exitmusic__/]

This is just incredibly, wonderfully, delightfully hot. Really really hot. So very fucking hot.

[bertybertle.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Yeah, it's just rude, isn't it? Heheheheh! My Mum would kill me!

Thanks for feeding back - made me grin.