Fic: Best Ending
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ds_slashNew comer say hello! I started to watch Due South only recently and this is my first DS fic.
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(Note from a Later Edit: This version is un-betaed. The betaed version, credited to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
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Title: Best Ending (1/1)
Category: Due South Fan Fiction
Pairing: Ray Kowalski and Benton Fraser
Timeline: A couple of years after Ray Kowalski took Ray Vecchio’s identity.
Summary: Ray Vecchio was coming back…
Word Count: Around 1600
Rated PG
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ckr_actorfic and my own place jane2010
It was almost noon.
Ray walked to his desk, moved the chair a bit and sat down. In front of him the pizza he ordered was already there, but he didn’t feel like eating. “The weather’s bad enough,” he thought, “looks like going to rain.” But he couldn’t blame the weather; he knew.
And the air wasn’t right, either. It felt like the building were under some kind of weird vacuum treatment. The air around him were decreasing so fast that it almost made his breath difficult. “Got to get out for a while.” With the thought he rose and made for the elevator.
He stood there by the elevator door, his left forehead resting against the wall, eyes fixing on nowhere; one could tell from his appearance that he was depressed, or more than depressed—desperate.
The only thing he knew was, after this Lieutenant Welsh told him about Vecchio’s coming back this morning, he had been like this, and he didn’t know why.
Was it for that he was jealous of Vecchio’s accomplishment of the mission? Couldn’t be. He was too cocky to be jealous. Besides, he didn’t give a shit about how the secret organization had functioned through the years and craftily got away every time, or how Vecchio successfully nailed it down, or anything that Lieutenant Welsh had been prattling on all the morning like he were the hero. He didn’t give a shit.
Then what was it?
“Ray! Are you waiting for the elevator or is the elevator waiting for you? You know what? I don’t think it’ll wait any longer if you mean to test its patience.”
Ray looked up and saw the familiar big smile and the scarlet uniform. Yes scarlet, the bight, warm, and now almost life giving color.
“Your presence is a comfort, Fraser.” Ray walked into the elevator with Fraser.
“Is it?” Fraser cast a sidelong glance at Ray, whom still looked terrible.
“More than a comfort I think, “ Fraser continued, “If it were not for some of my ‘presences’, you wouldn’t have been here today, I mean, safe and sound.”
Fraser’s words worked. One could almost see a faint smile on Ray’s face.
“By the way, “ Fraser said, “Have you heard that Ray had done his job and was on his way back…”
“I know.”
“I mean, Vecchio.”
“I know.”
The streets were no different from those on any other day.
“I thought you’d be happy to hear that.” Fraser said.
“Why?” Ray still hung his head as if he didn’t expect an answer.
“Since Vecchio is coming back to his position, you can take you own identity back; or even, quit police work to do something you really like--I remember you once told me that you hated the job.
“I still do.”
Fraser shrugged—he gave up. Probably at the moment it’d be better leave this unhappy man alone.
Minding his own things, Ray nearly bumped into a short elder lady before Fraser took him by his arms.
“Excuse me!” Fraser said.
The wrinkles all over her face, the antiquated clothes, and that mysterious string of beads around her neck reminded Ray a palm reader or something.
“Yes I am.” The lady blurted out.
The unexpected “reply” made Ray felt blank.
“What?” The only thing Ray could say.
“What? You know what!”
The lady then turned to Fraser, whose expression showed interest, and politeness at the same time.
“You’re a police officer?”
“Yes Mam. Exactly, I am Canadian Royal Mounted Police. I first came to Chicago…”
“I see…” The lady didn’t wait till Fraser finished, “Be careful of kids in alleys. And be careful of gunshots that endanger your life.”
“I will. Thank you Mam.”
For the last time the lady turned to Ray, “You didn’t enjoy your lunch, did you?” Then she walked on, leaving Ray and Fraser behind.
“Did you?” Fraser laughed to Ray.
Ray was amused, “Wield woman.”
“I’ve got to grab a bite. You move on. I’ll catch you later.” Ray said.
“Fine.”
Food could have special effects, almost magical sometimes. Now Ray felt much better after his late lunch. “What a spooky woman!” He thought, “And funny as well, except for those words about ‘deadly gunshots’…”
“Bang!” Distant but clear.
Ray rose immediately and ran towards the direction of the shot, so fast as he had meant to catch the fading away tail of the sound.
You could say it was a police officer’s instinct that made him do so. But not exactly this time. He could almost feel his heart sank at the shot.
“Be careful…gunshots…endanger your life…I will…thank you…” Those words started ringing in his ears at the shot but wouldn’t fade away with it. They only repeated themselves again and again, and got louder and louder. They came so illogically but he didn’t have time to think about it. Yes he didn’t think; he just ran. But there are times when things came to your mind by themselves and you cannot control. And at that moment, for the first time in Ray’s I-don’t-give-a-shit life, he felt there was something there that he couldn’t afford to lose.
And when they say your entire life plays a movie in your head before you die, they miss a point. The point is, you don’t have to die physically to experience this. For example now, Ray’s whole life started to play in front of his eyes. To his surprise, or as he had always known, it was all about Fraser.
“Raymond Vecchio, Detective First Grade, Chicago PD. Everyone knows who I am, Fraser, how about you?”…”You called me Ray…Yes you did.”…” Trust you, Fraser? I don't even know if I trust me. That might've been my finger on the trigger. ” …
It seemed to start with this person, and today most likely it would end with this person as well. Or it was not like a movie; it was like waking from a long sleep and coming to the real world that he had never known.
“Fraser! ” Ray searched all the way and found finally in an alley Fraser learned against the wall, one of his arms wounded.
Fraser managed to stand on his feet, intended to chase the kid running away from him, before Ray stopped him.
“Don’t! He has a gun.”
“What?” Fraser looked quite puzzled, “They all ‘has a gun’!”
“Just don’t.” Ray looked away from Fraser’s gaze, as though he couldn’t stand the heat and determination that had always been there in Fraser’s eyes.
“Er, are you OK?” Ray glanced briefly over Fraser’s face.
“I’m fine.”
“Are you sure you can manage it all by yourself?” Ray asked, concerned.
“I think so. Thanks. But I think I’d better go back to the police station for some treatment.”
Ray followed Fraser, his heart faltered with Fraser’s steps, “Better get a taxi…Taxi!”
Ray helped Fraser into the taxi and sat next to him, his eyes looked down, through the taxi floor, far far away through it as though he had lost in rumination.
“What’s wrong?”
“What?”
“Your eyes. Excuse me but was it tears? “
Yes it was tears, but Ray quickly wiped them away like nothing had happened. “No? Nothing. “
Fraser turned his head and looked out of the window as if he was finally persuaded that it was indeed a Ray Kowalski rainy day.
And at that moment, Ray knew that when he said “No nothing”, he was hiding his feelings. In fact, he had been hiding his feelings all the time since long ago, only he didn’t realize then. But now he knew, about his hiding, about his awful lunch, about “the bad weather”, about “the suffocating air”, about everything.
He came to admit that it was love, that he loved Fraser.
“Fraser we got to talk.” It was more exactly his mind talking than him.
“About what?”
“We’ll talk about it later.”
“Oh my god, Fraser, are you OK?” It was Francesca, “Let me help, let me help!”
“I’m fine, thank you, but I think I can manage it myself.”
“OK then…Oh! I almost forgot, there’s a postcard for you.”
“Whom was it from?” Ray asked.
“Vecchio. He said he would be back within the week.”
“That’d be… great. So, he sent postcards once in a while so you don’t forget this old friend?” Ray managed a smile.
“Yes…no, actually no. Saving the postcards I’d still remember him.”
“For what?”
“For what? For…he was a good partner.”
Ray hung his head for a second, and then raised his head again, “Am I?”
“You? … I think so?” Fraser put the card down and smiled to Ray, whom almost made a breathing spell at Fraser’s reply.
“You said you wanna talk?”
“Yeah, “Ray close his eyes for a little while, and then opened them, “Just forget it!”
You cannot always get yourself a happy ending but you can always choose a best one. Ray knew it, and he knew he would leave this place with a lighter heart, because he knew he would always be remembered, by the love of his life.
“I’ll get you some medications and things. Sit here! And don’t move your ass!”
Fraser laughed, “So Ray, I’m glad to see that some of your personalities are coming back!”
“Just sit there OK?”
“Okay.”
(The End)
Comment please! I'd love to know what you think!
(Note from a Later Edit: This version is un-betaed. The betaed version, credited to
aukestrel, will come out later.)Title: Best Ending (1/1)
Category: Due South Fan Fiction
Pairing: Ray Kowalski and Benton Fraser
Timeline: A couple of years after Ray Kowalski took Ray Vecchio’s identity.
Summary: Ray Vecchio was coming back…
Word Count: Around 1600
Rated PG
X-posted at
ckr_actorfic and my own place jane2010It was almost noon.
Ray walked to his desk, moved the chair a bit and sat down. In front of him the pizza he ordered was already there, but he didn’t feel like eating. “The weather’s bad enough,” he thought, “looks like going to rain.” But he couldn’t blame the weather; he knew.
And the air wasn’t right, either. It felt like the building were under some kind of weird vacuum treatment. The air around him were decreasing so fast that it almost made his breath difficult. “Got to get out for a while.” With the thought he rose and made for the elevator.
He stood there by the elevator door, his left forehead resting against the wall, eyes fixing on nowhere; one could tell from his appearance that he was depressed, or more than depressed—desperate.
The only thing he knew was, after this Lieutenant Welsh told him about Vecchio’s coming back this morning, he had been like this, and he didn’t know why.
Was it for that he was jealous of Vecchio’s accomplishment of the mission? Couldn’t be. He was too cocky to be jealous. Besides, he didn’t give a shit about how the secret organization had functioned through the years and craftily got away every time, or how Vecchio successfully nailed it down, or anything that Lieutenant Welsh had been prattling on all the morning like he were the hero. He didn’t give a shit.
Then what was it?
“Ray! Are you waiting for the elevator or is the elevator waiting for you? You know what? I don’t think it’ll wait any longer if you mean to test its patience.”
Ray looked up and saw the familiar big smile and the scarlet uniform. Yes scarlet, the bight, warm, and now almost life giving color.
“Your presence is a comfort, Fraser.” Ray walked into the elevator with Fraser.
“Is it?” Fraser cast a sidelong glance at Ray, whom still looked terrible.
“More than a comfort I think, “ Fraser continued, “If it were not for some of my ‘presences’, you wouldn’t have been here today, I mean, safe and sound.”
Fraser’s words worked. One could almost see a faint smile on Ray’s face.
“By the way, “ Fraser said, “Have you heard that Ray had done his job and was on his way back…”
“I know.”
“I mean, Vecchio.”
“I know.”
The streets were no different from those on any other day.
“I thought you’d be happy to hear that.” Fraser said.
“Why?” Ray still hung his head as if he didn’t expect an answer.
“Since Vecchio is coming back to his position, you can take you own identity back; or even, quit police work to do something you really like--I remember you once told me that you hated the job.
“I still do.”
Fraser shrugged—he gave up. Probably at the moment it’d be better leave this unhappy man alone.
Minding his own things, Ray nearly bumped into a short elder lady before Fraser took him by his arms.
“Excuse me!” Fraser said.
The wrinkles all over her face, the antiquated clothes, and that mysterious string of beads around her neck reminded Ray a palm reader or something.
“Yes I am.” The lady blurted out.
The unexpected “reply” made Ray felt blank.
“What?” The only thing Ray could say.
“What? You know what!”
The lady then turned to Fraser, whose expression showed interest, and politeness at the same time.
“You’re a police officer?”
“Yes Mam. Exactly, I am Canadian Royal Mounted Police. I first came to Chicago…”
“I see…” The lady didn’t wait till Fraser finished, “Be careful of kids in alleys. And be careful of gunshots that endanger your life.”
“I will. Thank you Mam.”
For the last time the lady turned to Ray, “You didn’t enjoy your lunch, did you?” Then she walked on, leaving Ray and Fraser behind.
“Did you?” Fraser laughed to Ray.
Ray was amused, “Wield woman.”
“I’ve got to grab a bite. You move on. I’ll catch you later.” Ray said.
“Fine.”
Food could have special effects, almost magical sometimes. Now Ray felt much better after his late lunch. “What a spooky woman!” He thought, “And funny as well, except for those words about ‘deadly gunshots’…”
“Bang!” Distant but clear.
Ray rose immediately and ran towards the direction of the shot, so fast as he had meant to catch the fading away tail of the sound.
You could say it was a police officer’s instinct that made him do so. But not exactly this time. He could almost feel his heart sank at the shot.
“Be careful…gunshots…endanger your life…I will…thank you…” Those words started ringing in his ears at the shot but wouldn’t fade away with it. They only repeated themselves again and again, and got louder and louder. They came so illogically but he didn’t have time to think about it. Yes he didn’t think; he just ran. But there are times when things came to your mind by themselves and you cannot control. And at that moment, for the first time in Ray’s I-don’t-give-a-shit life, he felt there was something there that he couldn’t afford to lose.
And when they say your entire life plays a movie in your head before you die, they miss a point. The point is, you don’t have to die physically to experience this. For example now, Ray’s whole life started to play in front of his eyes. To his surprise, or as he had always known, it was all about Fraser.
“Raymond Vecchio, Detective First Grade, Chicago PD. Everyone knows who I am, Fraser, how about you?”…”You called me Ray…Yes you did.”…” Trust you, Fraser? I don't even know if I trust me. That might've been my finger on the trigger. ” …
It seemed to start with this person, and today most likely it would end with this person as well. Or it was not like a movie; it was like waking from a long sleep and coming to the real world that he had never known.
“Fraser! ” Ray searched all the way and found finally in an alley Fraser learned against the wall, one of his arms wounded.
Fraser managed to stand on his feet, intended to chase the kid running away from him, before Ray stopped him.
“Don’t! He has a gun.”
“What?” Fraser looked quite puzzled, “They all ‘has a gun’!”
“Just don’t.” Ray looked away from Fraser’s gaze, as though he couldn’t stand the heat and determination that had always been there in Fraser’s eyes.
“Er, are you OK?” Ray glanced briefly over Fraser’s face.
“I’m fine.”
“Are you sure you can manage it all by yourself?” Ray asked, concerned.
“I think so. Thanks. But I think I’d better go back to the police station for some treatment.”
Ray followed Fraser, his heart faltered with Fraser’s steps, “Better get a taxi…Taxi!”
Ray helped Fraser into the taxi and sat next to him, his eyes looked down, through the taxi floor, far far away through it as though he had lost in rumination.
“What’s wrong?”
“What?”
“Your eyes. Excuse me but was it tears? “
Yes it was tears, but Ray quickly wiped them away like nothing had happened. “No? Nothing. “
Fraser turned his head and looked out of the window as if he was finally persuaded that it was indeed a Ray Kowalski rainy day.
And at that moment, Ray knew that when he said “No nothing”, he was hiding his feelings. In fact, he had been hiding his feelings all the time since long ago, only he didn’t realize then. But now he knew, about his hiding, about his awful lunch, about “the bad weather”, about “the suffocating air”, about everything.
He came to admit that it was love, that he loved Fraser.
“Fraser we got to talk.” It was more exactly his mind talking than him.
“About what?”
“We’ll talk about it later.”
“Oh my god, Fraser, are you OK?” It was Francesca, “Let me help, let me help!”
“I’m fine, thank you, but I think I can manage it myself.”
“OK then…Oh! I almost forgot, there’s a postcard for you.”
“Whom was it from?” Ray asked.
“Vecchio. He said he would be back within the week.”
“That’d be… great. So, he sent postcards once in a while so you don’t forget this old friend?” Ray managed a smile.
“Yes…no, actually no. Saving the postcards I’d still remember him.”
“For what?”
“For what? For…he was a good partner.”
Ray hung his head for a second, and then raised his head again, “Am I?”
“You? … I think so?” Fraser put the card down and smiled to Ray, whom almost made a breathing spell at Fraser’s reply.
“You said you wanna talk?”
“Yeah, “Ray close his eyes for a little while, and then opened them, “Just forget it!”
You cannot always get yourself a happy ending but you can always choose a best one. Ray knew it, and he knew he would leave this place with a lighter heart, because he knew he would always be remembered, by the love of his life.
“I’ll get you some medications and things. Sit here! And don’t move your ass!”
Fraser laughed, “So Ray, I’m glad to see that some of your personalities are coming back!”
“Just sit there OK?”
“Okay.”
(The End)
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Date: 2006-05-16 01:36 pm (UTC)Ray walked to his desk, moved the chair a bit and sat down. In front of him the pizza he ordered was already there, but he didn’t feel like eating. “The weather’s bad enough,” he thought, “looks like going to rain.” But he couldn’t blame the weather; he knew.
[This is too much "telling," not enough "showing." You could do something like Ray sat down, moving his chair around restlessly. The pizza he'd ordered was in front of him, but he didn't feel like eating. Even inside he could hear the distant rumble of thunder: rain wasn't far off. But he couldn't blame the weather, he knew.]
And the air wasn’t right, either. It felt like the building were under some kind of weird vacuum treatment. The air around him were decreasing so fast that it almost made his breath difficult. “Got to get out for a while.” With the thought he rose and made for the elevator.
[And the air wasn't right, either. The building felt like it was under some kind of weird vaccuum treatment and he suddenly found he couldn't get his breath. "Got to get out for a while," he muttered and made for the stairs. (There is no elevator at the 27th.)]
He stood there by the elevator door, his left forehead resting against the wall, eyes fixing on nowhere; one could tell from his appearance that he was depressed, or more than depressed—desperate.[Take this out altogether.]The only thing he knew was, after this Lieutenant Welsh told him about Vecchio’s coming back this morning, he had been like this, and he didn’t know why.
[He didn't know what was wrong with him. All he knew was that Vecchio was coming back: Welsh had told him this morning.]
Was it for that he was jealous of Vecchio’s accomplishment of the mission? Couldn’t be. He was too cocky to be jealous. Besides, he didn’t give a shit about how the secret organization had functioned through the years and craftily got away every time, or how Vecchio successfully nailed it down, or anything that Lieutenant Welsh had been prattling on all the morning like he were the hero. He didn’t give a shit.
[Was it that he was jealous of Vecchio? Welsh had been going on likek he was some kind of big hero, and Ray guessed he was. Vecchio'd worked the case and nailed the bad guys. But that was all good, and the best part was that Ray had been here. He didn't think he was jealous. He was pretty sure he wasn't.]
So if that wasn't it, then what was it?
“Ray! Are you waiting for the elevator or is the elevator waiting for you? You know what? I don’t think it’ll wait any longer if you mean to test its patience.”[We got rid of the elevator.]"Ray! I'd hoped I'd find you."
Ray looked up and saw the familiar big smile and the scarlet uniform. Yes scarlet, the bight, warm, and now almost life giving color.
[Coming down the steps, Ray looked up to see Fraser, big and red, walking towards him, his smile as welcoming as ever, and suddenly he could breathe again.]
“Your presence is a comfort, Fraser.” Ray walked into the elevator with Fraser.
“Is it?” Fraser cast a sidelong glance at Ray, whom still looked terrible.
“More than a comfort I think, “ Fraser continued, “If it were not for some of my ‘presences’, you wouldn’t have been here today, I mean, safe and sound.”
Fraser’s words worked. One could almost see a faint smile on Ray’s face.
[It's not really in character for Fraser to remind Ray that he's saved his life several times - it's more in character for Fraser to remind Ray that Ray has saved Fraser's life several times.]
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Date: 2006-05-16 01:37 pm (UTC)“I know.”
“Ray Vecchio, I mean.”
“I know.”
The streets were no different from those on any other day.“I thought you’d be happy to hear that,” Fraser said.
“Why?” Ray still hung his head as if he didn’t expect an answer.
["Why?" Ray felt his head drooping as if his neck had no strength to hold it up.]
“Since Vecchio is coming back to his position, you can take you own identity back; or even, quit police work to do something you really like--I remember you once told me that you hated the job.
["Since Ray Vecchio is coming back, you can have your own identity back. Your own life. I remember once you told me that you hated police work, even though I think you're good at it."]
“I still do.”
Fraser shrugged—he gave up. Probably at the moment it’d be better leave this unhappy man alone.
[Out of the corner of his eye, Ray could see Fraser shrug. Yeah, there were some buildings even Mounties wouldn't jump off.]
Minding his own things, Ray nearly bumped into a short elder lady before Fraser took him by his arms.
[Lost in his thoughts, Ray nearly bumped into a short elderly woman when he felt Fraser's hand on his arm.]
“Excuse me!” Fraser said.
["I beg your pardon," Fraser said.]
The wrinkles all over her face, the antiquated clothes, and that mysterious string of beads around her neck reminded Ray a palm reader or something.
[The wrinkles all over her face, the antiquated clothes, and that mysterious string of beads around her neck reminded Ray of a gypsy or a fortuneteller or something.]
“Yes, I am,” the woman said.
The unexpected “reply” made Ray felt blank.
[Her unexpected response made Ray feel blank.]
“What?”
The only thing Ray could say.“What? You know what!”
The
ladywoman then turned to Fraser,whose expression showed interestwho looked interested and polite all at the same time., and politeness at the same time.“You’re a police officer?”
“Yes, ma'am. I am a member of the Royal Canadian Mounted Police. I first came to Chicago…”
“I see.” The
ladywoman didn’t wait till Fraser finished. “Be careful of kids in alleys. And be careful of gunshots that endanger your life.”“I will. Thank you, ma'am.”
For the last time the lady turned to Ray,The woman then turned to Ray. “You didn’t enjoy your lunch, did you?” Then she walkedonaway., leaving Ray and Fraser behind.“Did you?” Fraser
laughed to Rayasked Ray, smiling.Ray was reluctantly amused. “
WieldWild woman.”“I’ve got to grab a bite. You move on. I’ll catch you later.” Ray said.
“Fine.”
Food could have special effects, almost magical sometimes. Now Ray felt much better after his late lunch. “What a spooky woman!” He thought, “And funny as well, except for those words about ‘deadly gunshots’…”
[Try something like Suddenly Ray felt hungry. He asked Fraser if he wanted to get a bite to eat, but Fraser said he had already eaten and needed to take Dief for a walk. So Ray grabbed a hot dog from a street vendor and ate hungrily.]
“Bang!” The noise was distant but clear.
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Date: 2006-05-16 01:38 pm (UTC)rose immediatelydropped the rest of his hotdog and ran towards the direction of the shot, so fast as he had meant to catch the fading away tail of the sound.You could say it was a police officer’s instinct that made him do so. But not exactly this time. He could almost feel his heart
sankat theshotsound.“Be careful…gunshots…endanger your life…I will…thank you…” Those words started ringing in his ears at the shot but wouldn’t fade away with it. They only repeated themselves again and again, and got louder and louder. They came so illogically but he didn’t have time to think about it.
Yes he didn’t think; he just ran.But there are times when thingscamecome toyourmind by themselves andyou cannot controlcannot be controlled. And at that moment, for the first time in a long time in Ray's I-don’t-give-a-shit life, he felt there was something there that he couldn’t afford to lose.And when they say your entire life plays a movie in your head before you die, they miss
athe point, which is that you don't have to be the one who's dying. As he ran, Ray’s whole life started to play in front of his eyes. To his surprise, or maybe as he had always known, it was all about Fraser.“Raymond Vecchio, Detective First Grade, Chicago PD. Everyone knows who I am, Fraser, how about you?”…”You called me Ray…Yes you did.”…” Trust you, Fraser? I don't even know if I trust me. That might've been my finger on the trigger. ”
It seemed to start with this person, and today most likely it would end with this person as well.His life had started over with this person and it would, he realized, probably end with him too. It wasn't like a movie; it was like waking from a long sleep and coming into the real world that he had never known.“Fraser! ” Fraser was in an alley, leaning against a wall, the red of his uniform darker in one spot on his arm. As Ray watched, Fraser managed to
stand onto his feet, clearly indendingintendedto chase the kidrunning away from him, before Ray stopped him.“Don’t! He has a gun.”
“What?” Fraser looked quite puzzled, “They all ‘
hashave a gun’!”“Just don’t.” Ray looked away from Fraser’s gaze, as though he couldn’t stand the heat and determination that he now realized had always been there
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Date: 2006-05-16 01:39 pm (UTC)“I’m fine, it's just a scratch.”
“Are you sure you can manage it all by yourself?” Ray asked, concerned.I think so. Thanks. But“I think you’d better come back to the 2-7 for some first aid. Better get a taxi…Taxi!”Ray helped Fraser into the taxi and sat next to him, his eyes looked down, through the taxi floor, far far away through it as though he had lost in rumination.
“What’s wrong?”
“What?”
“Your eyes. Excuse me but was it tears? “
Yes it was tears, but Ray quickly wiped them away like nothing had happened. “No. Nothing. “
Fraser turned his head and looked out of the window as if he was finally persuaded that it was indeed a Ray Kowalski rainy day.
And at that moment, Ray knew that when he said “No, nothing,” he was hiding his feelings. In fact, he had been hiding his feelings all
the time since long agoalong, only he didn’t realize then. But now he knew, about his hiding, about his awful lunch, about “the bad weather”, about “the suffocating air”, about everything.He came to admit that it was love, that he loved Fraser.
“Fraser, we got to talk.”
It was more exactly his mind talking than him.“About what?”
“We’ll talk about it later.”
“Oh my god, Fraser, are you OK?” Of course it was Frannie, trying to get her hands all over the Mountie. “Let me help, let me help!”
“I’m fine, thank you, but I think I can manage it myself.”
“Okay, then…Oh! I almost forgot, there’s a postcard for you.”
“Who's it from?” Ray asked as Fraser turned it over.
“Ray Vecchio. He says he'll be back within the week.”
“That’d be… great. So he sends postcards once in a while so you don’t won't forget him?” Ray managed a smile.
“Yes…no, actually no. Saving the postcards, I’d still remember him.”
“For what?”
“For what? For…he was a good partner.”
Ray hung his head for a second, and
then raised his head againsummoned the courage to ask, “Am I?”“You? … I think so, yes.” Fraser put the card down and smiled at Ray, who almost sighed out loud.
“You said you wanted to talk?”
“Yeah." Ray closed his eyes for a second
little while, and then opened them. “Just forget it!”You cannot always get
yourselfa happy ending but you canalwayschoose a best one. Ray knewitthat, and he knew he would leave this place with a lighter heart, because he knew he would always be remembered,by the love of his life.“I’ll get you the first aid kit. Sit here! And don’t move your ass!”
Fraser laughed. “
SoRay, I’m glad to see that some of your personalities are coming back!”“Just sit there,
OKokay?”“Okay.”
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Date: 2006-05-16 03:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-16 03:33 pm (UTC)I'm going to revise it, thank you, again!
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Date: 2006-05-16 06:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-17 07:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-17 05:03 pm (UTC)I think I read the above a little different to you. I took it as "weird woman", because the woman seemed a little strange to me.
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Date: 2006-05-18 03:57 pm (UTC)Interesting. But I think at that moment Ray was too bewildered to say something witty like that.
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Date: 2006-05-18 04:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-05-18 04:25 pm (UTC)WieldWild woman." and you said you'd take "Wield woman." I got it, at last.no subject
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Date: 2006-05-19 07:06 pm (UTC)